phrasewrite's comment history

phrasewrite said...

Who, What, Why, When, Where ... the basic journalism 101 is missing.

November 28, 2011 at 2:58 p.m.
phrasewrite said...

Thousands of dollars to fix two hacked web sites? I'd like to know what web site company is charging them such an astronomical rate for a couple hours of clean up. Or even less time if one just rolls back the server to an earlier state. I'd like to have that account.

November 18, 2011 at 2:46 p.m.
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November 17, 2011 at 3:46 p.m.
phrasewrite said...

@BravesDave - we can only hope that you lose your job one day, so that you have plenty of time to re-read your comment. And I'm going to guess that you also are a front-bencher at your church each and every Sunday, putting on a good show there too. Nice.

October 11, 2011 at 4 p.m.
phrasewrite said...

This is so great for Chattanoogans. And I would rather go without helmet and have access to these bikes than to use a helmet worn by others ... for all the reasons we learned in elementary school. Before immediately shooting it down for political score keeping, just give it a go and see how it works. It is a plus for our community.

September 21, 2011 at 9:01 a.m.
phrasewrite said...

We hear that these two never graduated from Daycare.

September 20, 2011 at 1:26 p.m.
phrasewrite said...

Holly, basically you just "one sourced" a story from the man who owns a company who is selling chia seeds now (since the pets are not the over-the-top money maker anymore.) This is not journalism, this is an unpaid commercial or promotional piece. If you had just one or two more sources -- it would have been a much more reliable and informative "need to know" lifestyle story. I can tell that you are a good writer, and even though this is the Lifestyle section of the paper, a little more work on this piece could have given it a researched and balanced approach (journalism.) Please think along those lines in the future. Thank you.

August 18, 2011 at 9:48 a.m.
phrasewrite said...

It says a lot about these folks that they don't pull over on the side of the road and allow the snake to get off of their vehicle.

August 2, 2011 at 2:52 p.m.
phrasewrite said...
June 16, 2011 at 9:16 a.m.
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